Male C. Pig a.k.a. Svinopolist (piggymouse) wrote,
Male C. Pig a.k.a. Svinopolist
piggymouse

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Beating obedient

Уже неделю слушаю все доступные для скачивания версии и ремиксы некоего нишево популярного трека — и только сегодня мне в мозг вступила рифма.

I see a ship in the harbour,
I can and shall obey,
But, if it wasn't for your misfortune,
I'd be a heavenly person today.
And I thought I was mistaken,
And I thought I heard you speak.
Tell me, how do I feel?
Tell me now, how should I feel?

Damyata: The boat* responded
Gaily, to the hand expert with sail and oar.
The sea was calm, your heart would have responded
Gaily, when invited, beating obedient
To controlling hands.**


* — The outwardly accidental juxtaposition of ship vs. boat is striking, don't you agree?

** — Enjabments in every line break but one betray a state of extreme exasperation. Unsurprisingly so.

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